A University should accept male and female students equally in every subject.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with the above statement?
Education play indespensible role in every ones' life. Although, all subjects have their own advantages, students should choose stream of their study according to their interest. However, it is argued that educational organisations ought to accept equal number of girls and boys in every subject. I completly disagree with the above said notion, because some seats will left vacant and another thing is that organisation will forced students to choose subjects according to university.
Firstly, if the seats are equally reserved for both genders in each subject, than some seats will remain vacant, Because it is not possible that make and women are equally interested in every subject such as most of the girls keen interest to art subjects; however boys like to chose mechanical subjects. Consequently, seats, which are equally devided by university in both communities will left unoccupy. For instance, the study of mechnical engineering is liked by boys, 90% percent seats are reserved by boys, if the university allote these seats according to gender, then their are so many seats left, which are issued for girls
Secondly, Organisations or universities, forced children to select the subjects according to seats not by their interest. Consequently some students distracted by teachers to change their goal. Not only students pick subjects acording to university needs, but also they have to set their future goals according to the teacher, each student has their own life and own dreams, so let them free to pick subjects according to their dreams.
In conclusion, I believe that seats are not divided into equal amount for boys and girls, because every gender has their own priorties and interest. If seats are fixed, then educational organisation forced them to select subject according to university. So according to me, universities should not fix seats according to gender.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to stream'
Suggestion: to stream
... own advantages, students should choose stream of their study according to their inter...
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Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'leave'
Suggestion: leave
...ve said notion, because some seats will left vacant and another thing is that organi...
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Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'force'
Suggestion: force
...another thing is that organisation will forced students to choose subjects according t...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...students to choose subjects according to university. Firstly, if the seats are...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ts will remain vacant, Because it is not possible that make and women are equally...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...st to art subjects; however boys like to chose mechanical subjects. Consequently,...
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Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'leave'
Suggestion: leave
... by university in both communities will left unoccupy. For instance, the study of me...
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Message: Did you mean 'there'?
Suggestion: there
...e these seats according to gender, then their are so many seats left, which are issue...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Consequently,
...cording to seats not by their interest. Consequently some students distracted by teachers to...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...as their own life and own dreams, so let them free to pick subjects according to ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... them free to pick subjects according to their dreams. In conclusion, I believ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, another thing, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1595.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.31666666667 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75683191766 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.513333333333 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 489.6 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 2.10420841683 333% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 92.3087738095 49.4020404114 187% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.916666667 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0833333333 7.06120827912 157% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169160527568 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0766502115021 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.036473071732 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117674533352 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0497236832315 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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