You are working for a company. You need to take some time off work and want to ask your manager about this.Write a letter to your manager. In your letter:explain why you want to take time off workgive details of the amount of time you needsuggest how your

Essay topics:

You are working for a company. You need to take some time off work and want to ask your manager about this.

Write a letter to your manager. In your letter:

explain why you want to take time off work
give details of the amount of time you need
suggest how your work could be covered while you are away

Dear Mr Smith,

Greetings for the day!

I am writing this letter to seek your permission to take off from work.

Please kindly allow me to elaborate on this matter. As you are aware of my research work regarding my PhD study. I let you know that I almost finished my work, still, some thesis is pending due to attending office daily. Hence, I am asking for your permission to take leave for 10 days.

Further, the submission date, which is fixed by University is the 30th of August. Owing to this, I have to submit my project work before that mentioned time period. If you allow my leave then, I will able to complete that task on time.

I know my temporary absence is inconvenient not only for you but also my other team member employees will suffer. However, I give you assurance, I will check my office e-mails, and response to every e-mail as soon as possible. Moreover, Sushil, who is work on our same team will handle my seat's work in my absence.

I am looking forward to hearing from you and expecting your kind cooperation.

Yours sincerely,
Amanpreet Kaur

Votes
Average: 8.1 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 53, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, look, moreover, regarding, so, still, then, you know

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 32.9175257732 115% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 897.0 937.175257732 96% => OK
No of words: 193.0 206.0 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.64766839378 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72725689877 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47703078197 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 127.690721649 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.647668393782 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 272.7 290.88556701 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 24.7897669287 44.8134815571 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 69.0 76.5299724578 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8461538462 16.8248392259 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.38461538462 4.34317383033 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.315598544582 0.216113520407 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110941217635 0.0766984524023 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0648439962881 0.0603063233224 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163275246588 0.12726935374 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0845883243473 0.0580467560999 146% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.9 8.37731958763 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.1 8.71597938144 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.93 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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