You are going to another country to study. You would like to do a part-time job while you are studying, so you want to ask a friend who lives there for some help. Write a letter to your friend .in your letter,
give details of your study plans
Explain why you want to get a part-time job
suggest how your friend could help your find a job.
Dear Jack,
Hope you are hale and hearty!
What is going on in life? How are uncle and aunt? Actually, through this letter I want to discus about my new study plan in your country.
Let me to shed some light on this matter. First of all I want to share my happiness with you because I am selected in top most university of Canada for higher education. I have been tried for Waterloo University since last year to complete my master degree in hotel management course.
Not only the fees of university, but also the accommodation rate is very high in your home town. Owing to this, I decided do a part-time job. I keen to interest a job which is related to my studies such as the manager job in hotel. I have previous two year experience that may be helpful to find a new job.
I remembered that you told by about your father's business about catering service in Kitchner provinces. Also, he has a very good contact with so many owners of hotels there. Can you help to find a job in one of these hotels with the help of your father?
Moreover, I also want to meet you. So, Please contact me on my mobile number +62533259 as soon as possible.
Best regards,
Aman
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ster degree in hotel management course. Not only the fees of university, but als...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...that may be helpful to find a new job. I remembered that you told by about your ...
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Line 9, column 5, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... soon as possible. Best regards, Aman
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, if, may, moreover, so, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 26.3917525773 136% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 951.0 937.175257732 101% => OK
No of words: 219.0 206.0 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.34246575342 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84690116678 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37006096251 2.54303337028 93% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 127.690721649 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.648401826484 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 304.2 290.88556701 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.9297970208 44.8134815571 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 59.4375 76.5299724578 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.6875 16.8248392259 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 4.34317383033 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.280030665708 0.216113520407 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0806597032594 0.0766984524023 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0673257482103 0.0603063233224 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13782514659 0.12726935374 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0367317115309 0.0580467560999 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.9 8.37731958763 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 70.7449484536 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.3 8.71597938144 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.24 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.