Art is considered an essential part of all cultures throughout the world. However, these days fewer and fewer people appreciate art and turn their focus to science, technology and business.
Why do you think that is?
What could be done to encourage more people to take interest in the arts?
Although, art is a fundamental part of all heritages all over the world; however, nowadays, fewer people favour art. Further, they turn their interest towards other fields such as science, technology and business.
The main reason behind this change is people feel that there is no bright future in the art field. Because no jobs are provided by the government as well as private sectors in this field, people tend their interest towards other lucrative streams. Moreover, no one appreciates the works of artists and no organization funds the exhibitions to encourage the work of artists. On the contrary side, the streams such as science, technology and business provide a lot of opportunities along with lucrative jobs. Therefore, people think if they pursue their career in art, then they just squandering their money, but gains nothing.
However, by applying some efforts the government could encourage people to take an interest in art. The government should open jobs in this field to paint and decorates our surrounding with beautiful art work. Exhibitions should be organized by authorities to motivate people about art, that art is the best way to express our feelings and emotions. By doing this, not only the government but also artists get financial benefit by selling their paintings and sculptures in these events. Prizes should be distributed every year for the best work in art. Hence, people who adore fame, definitely, they like to switch their interest towards art.
In conclusion, even fewer people currently, like to choose art because it provides less career opportunities for bright future, but, if government take a step forward and provides jobs and host exhibitions and so on, then people will change their mind and would like to pursue their career in this field.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, moreover, so, then, therefore, well, in conclusion, such as, as well as, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1510.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17123287671 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6441727374 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.551369863014 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 450.0 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.7340389211 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.857142857 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8571428571 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.289373758234 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108206586437 0.084324248473 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0704459791416 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.197222405753 0.151304729494 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0904971272066 0.056905535591 159% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.