You are going to another country to study. You would like to do a part-time job while you are studying, so you want to ask a friend who lives there for some help. Write a letter to your friend .in your letter,
give details of your study plans
Explain why you want to get a part-time job
suggest how your friend could help your find a job.
Dear Jack,
Hope you are hale and hearty!
What is going on in life? How are uncle and aunt? Actually, through this letter I want to discus about my new study plan in your country.
Let me to shed some light on this matter. First of all I want to share my happiness with you because I am selected in top most university of Canada for higher education. I have been tried for Waterloo University since last year to complete my master degree in hotel management course. Secondly, you lived here since your childhood, so I want to jaunt Kitchner city with you.
Not only the fees of university, but also the accommodation rate is very high in this city. Owing to this, I decided do a part-time job. I keen to interest a job which is related to my studies such as the manager job in hotel. I have two years experience that may be helpful to find a new job.
Suddenly, I remembered that moment when you told me by about your father's catering service business in hotels of Kitchner provinces. Also, he has a very good contact with so many owners of hotels there. Can you help to find a job in one of these hotels with the help of your father?
Moreover, I also want to meet you. So, Please contact me on my mobile number +62533259 as soon as possible.
Best regards,
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 375, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...I want to jaunt Kitchner city with you. Not only the fees of university, but als...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 26.3917525773 148% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1032.0 937.175257732 110% => OK
No of words: 237.0 206.0 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.35443037975 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92362132708 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38533622561 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 127.690721649 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.628691983122 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 328.5 290.88556701 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.1861687953 44.8134815571 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 64.5 76.5299724578 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8125 16.8248392259 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.625 4.34317383033 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 7.41237113402 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.306834399075 0.216113520407 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0894464272958 0.0766984524023 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0855536633947 0.0603063233224 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149935113919 0.12726935374 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0406766333961 0.0580467560999 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.5 8.37731958763 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.36 8.71597938144 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.26 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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