Write a letter to the mayor, the head of a municipal government, complaining about a situation in which some adolescents let their dogs run wildly causing a dangerous situation.
Dear Sir,
Greetings for the day!
My name is Amanpreet Kaur, resident of your town Patiala, Punjab, and through this letter, I want to bring your attention towards some teenagers, who create a severe problem by leaving their dogs freely in our local street.
Kindly allow me to elaborate on this matter. Firstly, the boys, who live in a rented house that is next to my house, have three dogs, and they leave them freely all the time. Secondly, the bread of dogs is Pitbull and Dobermann, which are very aggressive in nature. Besides this, these are not human-friendly. Last but not least, every day they dig so many holes in parks and also destroy the beauty of our parks.
Therefore, due to their fear the children of our society are not keen to play in playgrounds and walk along in parks after school. Meanwhile, the one old age man has been bitten by Pitbull dog. Still, these boys are not listening to our request to put their dogs in a cage and also abuse us.
Could you please take strict action against them? If this is done, not only children, but also parents will feel jubilant, and children will enjoy outdoor activities, which are essential for their physical growth.
Looking forward to your prompt action.
Yours Sincerely,
Amanpreet Kaur
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, if, look, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1048.0 937.175257732 112% => OK
No of words: 220.0 206.0 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.76363636364 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85128510684 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.32617161451 2.54303337028 91% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 127.690721649 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.686363636364 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 306.0 290.88556701 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.463917525773 862% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.6405883341 44.8134815571 138% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.6153846154 76.5299724578 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9230769231 16.8248392259 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 4.34317383033 161% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0922737287924 0.216113520407 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0267248208431 0.0766984524023 35% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0318910959397 0.0603063233224 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0390141158957 0.12726935374 31% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0333377625359 0.0580467560999 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 8.37731958763 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.03 8.71597938144 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.52 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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