ou have recently bought an airline ticket from a travel agency and unfortunately you are not able to fly on these dates. Write a letter to the travel agency manager to cancel the ticket. Explain in your letter- What are the flight details?- Why do you wan

Essay topics:

ou have recently bought an airline ticket from a travel agency and unfortunately you are not able to fly on these dates. Write a letter to the travel agency manager to cancel the ticket. Explain in your letter

- What are the flight details?
- Why do you want to cancel it?
- What would you like him/her to do about it?

Dear Sir, Madam,

Greetings for the day!

My name is Amanpreet Kaur, and through this letter, I request you to cancel my flight from Chandigarh to Mumbai.

Kindly allow me to elaborate on this matter. Firstly, the flight which I booked last month is B99 of British Airways. Secondly, the departure time of flight is 24 July 2019 at 11.00 am from Chandigarh to Mumbai.

Because of the postponement of the conference, I would like to cancel my ticket. However, the next conference meeting is rescheduled on the 1st of August. As there is a lot of difference in the time period, so I want your favour to cancel my ticket.

Could you help me to cancel this ticket as well as book ticket for 31 July? If you do this, then I shall be very thankful to your company. By doing so, I would be able to get an incentive from my company for this journey. Otherwise, I have to pay on my own. I hope your company will understand my situation.

Yours faithfully,
Amanpreet Kaur.

Votes
Average: 6.7 (1 vote)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, well, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 5.05154639175 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 806.0 937.175257732 86% => OK
No of words: 177.0 206.0 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.55367231638 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64748333727 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60455041221 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.61581920904 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 236.7 290.88556701 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.2603119081 44.8134815571 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 62.0 76.5299724578 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.6153846154 16.8248392259 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.61538461538 4.34317383033 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200390884535 0.216113520407 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0665487020856 0.0766984524023 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0492578567439 0.0603063233224 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0963309823027 0.12726935374 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0664944165493 0.0580467560999 115% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.8 8.37731958763 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 83.66 70.7449484536 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.8 7.45979381443 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.52 8.71597938144 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.31 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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