A large company in your area has decided to spend a certain amount of money, either to sponsor a local children’s sports team for two years, or to pay for two open-air concerts. It has asked for feedback from the general public.
Write a letter to the company.
describe the benefits of sponsoring the sports team
summarise the benefits of paying for the concerts
say how you think the company should spend the money
Dear Sir or Madam,
Greetings for the day!
My name is Amanpreet Kaur, a citizen of Patiala. I am so glad that your company priorities the feedback of our city's citizens to choose between sports team of children or concerts.
Firstly, as you mentioned in the feedback form that the company will sponsor a local children's sports team for two years. By doing so, not only the children are benefited but also our nation too. Because if you spend money on sports, then children will get more types of equipment and new sports facilities such as new footballs, net, sports shoes and many more. Therefore, more children are willing to participate in sports with enthusiasm.
Secondly, the concerts which will be going to organized by your company for two days in open-air related to music. However, as mentioned in the form is pop up and jazz. As, it is clearly shown that the concerts will be beneficial for the youngsters, who have a keen interest in this kind of musical concerts.
Here, I would like to give my own opinion, I believe that the company should spend money on sports rather than concerts. Because spending money on sports for two years really help to motivate children towards sports. I hope, the feedback of all the citizens will be the same as mine.
Yours faithfully,
Amanpreet kaur
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 47, Rule ID: GOING_TO_VBD[1]
Message: 'Going to' requires the base form: 'organize'
Suggestion: organize
...ly, the concerts which will be going to organized by your company for two days in open-ai...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, really, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, thus, kind of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 32.9175257732 61% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1091.0 937.175257732 116% => OK
No of words: 226.0 206.0 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82743362832 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87727950738 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49805704121 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 127.690721649 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.597345132743 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 316.8 290.88556701 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.1255208189 44.8134815571 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.9230769231 76.5299724578 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3846153846 16.8248392259 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.38461538462 4.34317383033 193% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.334466826739 0.216113520407 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115221110146 0.0766984524023 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102188169538 0.0603063233224 169% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18140330838 0.12726935374 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0394943947138 0.0580467560999 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 8.37731958763 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 8.71597938144 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.27 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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