A large company in your area has decided to spend a certain amount of money, either to sponsor a local children’s sports team for two years, or to pay for two open-air concerts. It has asked for feedback from the general public.
Write a letter to the company.
• describe the benefits of sponsoring the sports team
• summarise the benefits of paying for the concerts
• say how you think the company should spend the money
Write at least 150 words.
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am a noble citizen of our town Patiala. I have come to know that your company wants to spend money for our society and wants feedback to choose one from the two options. Therefore, I am writing to express my interest in this matter.
As you might know that the Football not only represents our city on international level but also motivate numerous citizens to participate in sports. Moreover, sports might be helpful to keep youngsters safe and sound from bad habits such as drugs and also helps to keep them healthy.
Perhaps, it would to possible to gain profit by sponsoring two open-air concerts. Owing to this, you may help to attract people in our town and we can show our folk music at national level. Moreover, by inviting spectators, it helps to boost the economy of our town.
After viewing the both options I would support the sports team. This is due to because by sponsoring this team for two years you can provide them all the facilities. Moreover, this team selected for coming international event so that if you assist them by money then they will motivate to win this match.
I hope you company will consider my suggestion,
Yours faithfully,
Amanpreet kaur
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
...on, Yours faithfully, Amanpreet kaur
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, moreover, so, then, therefore, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1023.0 937.175257732 109% => OK
No of words: 211.0 206.0 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84834123223 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81127787577 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55376806265 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 127.690721649 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.63981042654 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 297.9 290.88556701 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.0659043568 44.8134815571 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.25 76.5299724578 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5833333333 16.8248392259 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.83333333333 4.34317383033 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186809576762 0.216113520407 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0676538317119 0.0766984524023 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0795842088545 0.0603063233224 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0910562096063 0.12726935374 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0610817309232 0.0580467560999 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 8.37731958763 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.55 8.71597938144 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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