You are not happy with the course you are doing at college and would like to change to a different course.
Write a letter to the Head of Department to change your course. In your letter explain:
• what course are you doing now
• why you are not satisfied with that course
• what course would you like to change to
Dear Mr Smith,
Greetings for the day!
My name is Amanpreet Kaur, and I am a first-year student of Bachelor of Arts in your college. I am writing this letter to request you to change my current course to advanced level course as I am not pleased with my basic course.
I had a keen interest in playing Tennis owing to this I choose Physical Education basics course when I got admission in this college. Not only, as per the prospectus, the basic level course consists of practical work, but also teachers assure me that competitions will be organized by college every month to motivate students.
However, One month has been passed; still, they taught me theoretical work about this game which I already did during my school time. Along with this, I got my syllabus which is only related to only theoretical work. Owing to this, I displeased with this course. Moreover, Physical Education Advanced level course is going to begin next week. If you allow, me then I would like to switch my basic level course with an advanced level course
Looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely,
Amanpreet Kaur.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 15, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
.... Yours sincerely, Amanpreet Kaur.
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, look, moreover, so, still, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 941.0 937.175257732 100% => OK
No of words: 193.0 206.0 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87564766839 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72725689877 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50893862301 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 127.690721649 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.626943005181 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 282.6 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.5407348459 44.8134815571 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.1 76.5299724578 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3 16.8248392259 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.2 4.34317383033 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214147272473 0.216113520407 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0845116658417 0.0766984524023 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0898357437827 0.0603063233224 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109763229086 0.12726935374 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.077049485711 0.0580467560999 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 8.37731958763 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 8.71597938144 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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