You are studying English at a private language school attended by many international students. You are planning a surprise birthday party for a friend who has been feeling particularly sad and homesick. Write to another classmate and invite him/her to the party. In your letter:
• explain the reason for the party
• give the date and time of the party
• suggest what the classmate could bring to the party
Begin your letter as follows: Dear ________
Dear Jack,
How’re you buddy? Actually, through this letter I would like to invite you on my friend’s surprise birthday party.
As you know her, she is very intelligent girl of our class. But now these days I observe, she is mostly sad all the time due to her mother’s health. Further, she would like to stay at home after classes. Hence, I would like to through a party for her to make her rejuvenate.
I know many of our classmates are from overseas and not aware about the area of our city Patiala. Owing to this, birthday party is organized at our English language school on 10 November. So that everyone will easily reach at birthday party without harassment.
I already took permission from our class in charge to put some decoration things. Moreover, I suggest you to bring decoration material such as balloons, artificial flowers to make our classroom beautiful for her birthday celebration. See you at 10 November at 8 o’clock at our class to make all the arrangements.
Best regards,
Aman
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 189, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[3]
Message: “So that” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...English language school on 10 November. So that everyone will easily reach at birthday ...
^^^^^^^
Line 15, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... class to make all the arrangements. Best regards, Aman
^^^^^^
Line 19, column 5, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...angements. Best regards, Aman
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, hence, if, moreover, so, such as, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 872.0 937.175257732 93% => OK
No of words: 175.0 206.0 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98285714286 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63713576256 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84915454699 2.54303337028 112% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 127.690721649 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.651428571429 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 258.3 290.88556701 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.4309612555 44.8134815571 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.0769230769 76.5299724578 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.4615384615 16.8248392259 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.38461538462 4.34317383033 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.250500269152 0.216113520407 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0861606038704 0.0766984524023 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0563710918955 0.0603063233224 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152976100609 0.12726935374 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0229694662608 0.0580467560999 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 8.37731958763 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 70.7449484536 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.01 8.71597938144 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.35 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.