You are not happy with the course you are doing at college and would like to change to a different course.
Write a letter to the Head of Department to change your course. In your letter explain:
• what course are you doing now
• why you are not satisfied with that course
• what course would you like to change to
Dear Sir,
I am Bradd Pitt and studying MBA accounts in your college. I am writing this letter to you for requesting to change my current course to Finance. As Head of department, you warned me while opting the course about practical difficulties I might face while studying. However, soon I realised why my decision is wrong. I am quite not satisfied with accounts because scarce study materials and time consuming modules , lack of efficient faculty created disinterest in continuing the subject. When I was discussing with my friends I got to know that we have option to change our course in beginning of semester within 2 months from starting day of the course. As I have started my course only one month before I would like to opt for change my course.
After discussing with my seniors, lecturers I decided to pursue my course in Corporate Governance. Many topics like Doctrine of indoor management, Analytics in Amalgamations dragged my attention and inspired for taking this course. Library also has vast materials for doing enough research and my tutor also encouraged for the same. Please let me know, all formalities to be followed for changing course and any extra fee to be paid if necessary. I would also like to have your appointment for seeking your personal opinion about my decision. Thank you,once again for the opportunity and hope my new decision will gain your applaud.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir, I am Bradd Pitt and studying MBA account...
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Line 5, column 413, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...udy materials and time consuming modules , lack of efficient faculty created disin...
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Line 5, column 489, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “When” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... disinterest in continuing the subject. When I was discussing with my friends I got ...
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Line 9, column 508, Rule ID: PERSONAL_OPINION_FRIENDSHIP[1]
Message: Use simply 'opinion'.
Suggestion: opinion
... have your appointment for seeking your personal opinion about my decision. Thank you,once again...
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Line 9, column 553, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , once
...nal opinion about my decision. Thank you,once again for the opportunity and hope my n...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1168.0 937.175257732 125% => OK
No of words: 236.0 206.0 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94915254237 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91947592106 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73412512322 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 127.690721649 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.635593220339 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 365.4 290.88556701 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.8013565891 44.8134815571 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.8461538462 76.5299724578 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1538461538 16.8248392259 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.15384615385 4.34317383033 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.29896907216 47% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.26417922843 0.216113520407 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0930180271351 0.0766984524023 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0614591091165 0.0603063233224 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.216116174356 0.12726935374 170% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0521647388666 0.0580467560999 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 8.37731958763 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.13 8.71597938144 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 7.59969072165 113% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 41.2886597938 148% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.