You are not happy with the course you are doing at college and would like to change to a different course.
Write a letter to the Head of Department to change your course. In your letter explain:
• what course are you doing now
• why you are not satisfied with that course
• what course would you like to change to
Dear Mr Smith,
Greetings for the day!
My name is Amanpreet Kaur, and I am a first-year student of Bachelor of Arts in your college. Through this letter, I would like to seek your permission to change my course.
I had a keen interest in playing Tennis owing to this I choose Physical Education when I got admission in this college.
Still, I am not pleased with this course. In my class, we are 30 students including four girls. Not only boys but also girls are interested in playing cricket. Hence, they give their attention to play that game rather than tennis. Owing to this I feel alone and frustrated.
While I talked to my class in charge to allow me to switch my Physical Education course with Geography, then she asks me to take your permission first. Sir, I got 96 marks in geography during my school exams. Along with this, I won numerous competitions in this field. If you allow me to intake this course, then I will always be grateful for this.
Looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely,
Amanpreet Kaur.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 121, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...n when I got admission in this college. Still, I am not pleased with this course...
^^^
Line 16, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
.... Yours sincerely, Amanpreet Kaur.
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, look, so, still, then, while, i feel
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 32.9175257732 122% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 875.0 937.175257732 93% => OK
No of words: 185.0 206.0 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.72972972973 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68801715136 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50838768246 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.664864864865 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 249.3 290.88556701 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.1576056865 44.8134815571 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 62.5 76.5299724578 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.2142857143 16.8248392259 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.64285714286 4.34317383033 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163589709242 0.216113520407 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0584261410243 0.0766984524023 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0738291492714 0.0603063233224 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0781198132276 0.12726935374 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.071802237409 0.0580467560999 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.5 8.37731958763 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 83.66 70.7449484536 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.8 7.45979381443 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.27 8.71597938144 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.84 7.59969072165 90% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 41.2886597938 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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