In recent years, more and more people are choosing to read e-books rather than paper books.Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?you ordered a new cheque book from your bank two weeks ago but you have received nothing.Write a letter to the manager

Essay topics:

In recent years, more and more people are choosing to read e-books rather than paper books.
Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
you ordered a new cheque book from your bank two weeks ago but you have received nothing.
Write a letter to the manager complaining about the bad service. Say when and how you ordered the cheque book. Ask how much longer you will have to wait and ask the manager what action he will take over this matter.

Dear Sir/ Madam,
My name is Amanpreet Kaur, and I have my bank account in your bank State Bank of India, Patiala Branch, and through this letter, I would like to register my complaint regarding the cheque book service which is not yet sent by your bank.

Kindly allow me to elaborate on this matter. Firstly, I ordered a new cheque book since 14 of July, now it has been two weeks, but still, I did not get this. Secondly, I applied this by online bank service which is served by your bank. When I made a request for a new cheque book then I got a message of transaction. Moreover, the amount for a new cheque book is already paid by me via online transaction service.

It has been a long time. I m a private employee in marketing company so I have to need this to make a payment to my clients owing to this I need a cheque book on urgent basis. However, I will ready to wait for it up to more one week, if you delay more than this time period then I would like to switch my account to another bank. So, I need your favour to look into this matter personally, if possible.

Looking forward to your prompt response.
Yours faithfully,
Amanpreet Kaur

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
...ice which is not yet sent by your bank. Kindly allow me to elaborate on this mat...
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Line 9, column 18, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...your prompt response. Yours faithfully, Amanpreet Kaur
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, look, moreover, regarding, second, secondly, so, still, then

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 32.9175257732 115% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 945.0 937.175257732 101% => OK
No of words: 220.0 206.0 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.29545454545 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85128510684 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35853908417 2.54303337028 93% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577272727273 0.622605031667 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 289.8 290.88556701 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.8653764449 44.8134815571 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.75 76.5299724578 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3333333333 16.8248392259 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.83333333333 4.34317383033 180% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231410473847 0.216113520407 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0756814480794 0.0766984524023 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0533782100666 0.0603063233224 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1258093886 0.12726935374 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0518072433456 0.0580467560999 89% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 8.37731958763 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 70.7449484536 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.66 8.71597938144 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.11 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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