Your company is going to give a special training course for staff. Your manager has asked you to find out if the local conference centre has the right facilities to hold this course.
Write a letter to the manager of the conference centre. In your letter:
Give details about the course describe what equipment you will need for the course.
Ask some further questions about the facilities at the conference centre.
Dear Sir,
Greetings for the day!
I am Amanpreet Kaur employee of MTech Pvt. Ltd. Company at Patiala, Punjab; I want to book a conference hall in your hotel for one day which is 17.07.2019, to provide the training course for our staff. However, before booking, I want to clear some issues to avoid interruptions during our course.
Through this conference, our company is going to provide marketing strategies to the newly joined employee by using PowerPoint presentation. Therefore, we need some equipment in this hall such as one Projector, a big white screen, 20 microphones and 20 headphones.
Along with this, I would like to confirm some other facilities, which are available at your conference centre or not? Is the hall is fully air-conditioned or not? Will the mineral water bottles supplied by you or not? Moreover, the conference not only starts at 7 clocks in the morning, but the employees will do their breakfast and lunch there, so what are the charges for both meals? If you provide such data as soon as possible, then I able to word with my chairman of the company to book your conference centre.
Looking forward to your prompt response.
Yours faithfully,
Amanpreet Kaur
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, moreover, so, then, therefore, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 32.9175257732 64% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1021.0 937.175257732 109% => OK
No of words: 202.0 206.0 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05445544554 4.54256449028 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76996954942 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81912763797 2.54303337028 111% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 127.690721649 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.643564356436 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 288.9 290.88556701 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.0131925106 44.8134815571 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.0833333333 76.5299724578 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8333333333 16.8248392259 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.16666666667 4.34317383033 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.254804120046 0.216113520407 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0849514594824 0.0766984524023 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0694711054982 0.0603063233224 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116397953983 0.12726935374 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0595086513696 0.0580467560999 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 8.37731958763 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.71 8.71597938144 134% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.