Even though globalization affects the world's economies in very positive way, its negative side should not be forgotten. Discuss.
Many developing countries benefited by globalization. Although the world's economy is being increased by the globalization; however, affect our surrounding in various ways, such as undermining our culture, customs and food. In this essay, I will discuss both the positive and negative sides of globalization.
Firstly, if we look at its positive side, globalization makes life easy of individual and provides a variety of employment options worldwide. Hence, so many people, a nowadays keen interest to shift from one country to another, which provide them facilities according to their qualification as well as skills. Therefore, the developed countries also provide career opportunities to those kinds of people to make the economy of their nation lucrative. In addition to this, we now share and adopt new techniques to improve our working procedures such as in agriculture, we use hybrid<span class="hiddenSpellError" pre="use "></span> seeds, which we imported from other counties. Along with this, new companies are established by developed nations, by doing this, the economy of developing nations is improving day by day.
Secondly, on the other side, the lifestyle of the young generation more influenced by globalization. For Instance, in my country India, youngsters like to wear western dresses instead of their ethical wearing. Moreover, they do not like their customs and rituals. Consequently, lots of newly married couples separate from their families. Therefore, love and respect are totally abolished by the trend globalization. Further, more and more youngsters like to listen to western music and prefer to eat fast foods than of local foods. Owing to this, the folk music and the importance of local food are dying.
In conclusion, every trend has its own advantages, but the disadvantages cannot be neglected. With globalization, the economy of every nation improved by adopting the new technology as well as providing the employment of talented people. Still, this phenomenon impacts our culture, customs and the flavour of our traditional food.
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'worlds'' or 'world's'?
Suggestion: worlds'; world's
...enefited by globalization. Although the worlds economy is being increased by the globa...
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...tion. For Instance, in my country India, youngsters like to wear western dresses ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, firstly, hence, however, if, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, well, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1775.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 318.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.58176100629 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.51299525127 2.80592935109 125% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.603773584906 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 557.1 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.2121557898 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.6111111111 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6666666667 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2222222222 7.06120827912 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.117304838553 0.244688304435 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0375233631764 0.084324248473 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0570967418588 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0811545185516 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0642915708153 0.056905535591 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.3 50.2224549098 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.79 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.49 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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