Undeniably, the growth of the world economy has proved beneficial; although, its negative consequences are not ignorable. This essay will outline that globalization has the following advantages: reduction in poverty and increased mutual co-operation between countries whereas negative impacts on the environment and the domestic industries are the biggest disadvantages. However, this essay will discuss both views with relevant examples to illustrate my views.
Admittedly, globalization has resulted in the economic growth of numerous countries by reducing poverty levels. Nowadays, entrepreneurs from many western nations have shown their interest in the overseas market, such as India and China because they are the biggest consumers in the world. Since the last decade, huge investments are invested for the establishment of business's which has generated employment, consequently, reduced poverty. Additionally, the mutual co-operation on numerous issues among many nations have significantly increased because they are economically motivated. In present times, every nation has business ties with other countries, so any conflict between them can cause irreversible damage to their economic growth. Thus, the controversial matters are resolved by discussions and mutual understanding between them. For example, India and China have decade long disputes related to their international border despite that they came to an agreement due to their economic interest. Therefore, globalization has played an imperative role in alleviating impoverishment and promoted mutual co-operation.
On the contrary, it has negatively impacted our ecosystem because industries are growing at a rapid rate for maximizing the monetary benefits. The industrial sector has registered an uncontrolled expansion of the factory units across the globe since the last century; they use petroleum products to fulfill their energy needs, thereby causing water and air pollution at a massive scale. The elevated levels of pollution not only made water and air poisonous but also responsible for the elimination of many species of birds resulting in the disturbance of the food chain. Moreover, globalization has badly affected the small and mid-scale industry of a country because they are unable to compete with the products exported by foreign competitors. The domestic products are expensive because importing raw materials increase their manufacturing cost as compared to the firms from other nations, which provide economical products with advanced technology. These factors reduce the demand of the domestic product and the primary reason for the destruction of the local business. For Instance, Micromax has recently shut down its manufacturing units in India because a technology giant like Samsung has launched mobile phones with less price and the latest technology in India. Hence, globalization has a detrimental effect on the environment and national firms.
To summarize, globalization has reduced poverty and promoted co-operation in the international community even though its ramifications cannot be overlooked on the environment and local industries.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, hence, however, if, look, moreover, so, therefore, thus, whereas, for example, for instance, such as, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 24.0 8.3376753507 288% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2700.0 1615.20841683 167% => OK
No of words: 456.0 315.596192385 144% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.92105263158 5.12529762239 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62105577807 4.20363070211 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.15134249583 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 263.0 176.041082164 149% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576754385965 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 868.5 506.74238477 171% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.1236381913 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.0 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.1 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.114561135386 0.244688304435 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.037056486219 0.084324248473 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0484696831787 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0940638206582 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0552112262285 0.056905535591 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.9 13.0946893788 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 23.77 50.2224549098 47% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.35 12.4159519038 140% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.41 8.58950901804 121% => OK
difficult_words: 164.0 78.4519038076 209% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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