you ordered a new cheque book from your bank two weeks ago but you have received nothing.Write a letter to the manager complaining about the bad service. Say when and how you ordered the cheque book. Ask how much longer you will have to wait and ask the m

Essay topics:

you ordered a new cheque book from your bank two weeks ago but you have received nothing.
Write a letter to the manager complaining about the bad service. Say when and how you ordered the cheque book. Ask how much longer you will have to wait and ask the manager what action he will take over this matter

Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter to complain about the poor service provided by your bank recently. I ordered a new cheque book last month, but still, I do not get it yet. I made a call on last week to know the tracking number of my cheque book but your staff denied to answer this question.

Kindly allow me to elaborate on this matter. I applied cheque book before 14 days ago when I come to your bank in person. I had filled all the forms which are required and submitted this on the cashier desk. However, I have been 2 weeks, but it has not been received till now.

Since that time, I have not made any payments and so many bills pending owing to this. Hence, I need your favour to look into this matter. Further, kindly provide me, a detailed report regarding the delay of my cheque book. Moreover, Could you tell me, how much time your branch will take to send this to me?

Looking forward to you hear from you soon.

Yours faithfully,
Amanpreet Kaur

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 253, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'denied answering'.
Suggestion: denied answering
...number of my cheque book but your staff denied to answer this question. Kindly allow me to el...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 11, column 15, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...on. Yours faithfully, Amanpreet Kaur
^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, however, look, moreover, regarding, so, still

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 803.0 937.175257732 86% => OK
No of words: 184.0 206.0 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.36413043478 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68302321012 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.11618319923 2.54303337028 83% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.684782608696 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 236.7 290.88556701 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 24.8643657951 44.8134815571 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 61.7692307692 76.5299724578 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.1538461538 16.8248392259 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.38461538462 4.34317383033 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.304190678436 0.216113520407 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0927166189615 0.0766984524023 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0738846545569 0.0603063233224 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183341449113 0.12726935374 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0438198400438 0.0580467560999 75% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.2 8.37731958763 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.65 70.7449484536 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.42 8.71597938144 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.91 7.59969072165 91% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 41.2886597938 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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