You ordered a new chequebook from your bank two weeks ago but you have received nothing.
Write a letter to the manager complaining about the bad service. Say when and how you ordered the chequebook. Ask how much longer you will have to wait and ask the manager what action he will take over this matter.
Write at least 150 words.
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to not only express my dissatisfaction but also to complain about the poor quality of service I received from your bank.
I am an account holder in your bank The Bank of India. My account number is Saving Account-5565223255466655. On 5th of September when I visited your bank branch in Rajouri Garden I placed an order for five hundred leaves cheque book by filling the request form.
However, it has been more than fifteen days I have not received my cheque book at my address. I have raised the complaints by calling on the customer service number multiple times but I have not received any satisfactory response from your staff. I am suffering because of this as there are many payments that I have to make through cheque which I am not able to do
Kindly provide me with the proper explanation of the delay in the delivery an the poor quality of services provided. Moreover, please inform me for how long do I have to wait for my cheque book. I would also lie to know what necessary steps you will take for this issue.
I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours faithfully,
Prabhpreet Kaur
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 367, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...hrough cheque which I am not able to do Kindly provide me with the proper explan...
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Line 9, column 76, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...xplanation of the delay in the delivery an the poor quality of services provided. ...
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Line 9, column 76, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'an' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: an; the
...xplanation of the delay in the delivery an the poor quality of services provided. More...
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Line 15, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...n. Yours faithfully, Prabhpreet Kaur
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, moreover, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 955.0 937.175257732 102% => OK
No of words: 206.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.6359223301 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83995103769 2.54303337028 112% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 127.690721649 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.606796116505 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 289.8 290.88556701 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.7139343 44.8134815571 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.8181818182 76.5299724578 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7272727273 16.8248392259 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.81818181818 4.34317383033 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206716389071 0.216113520407 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.076212255488 0.0766984524023 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0425827668345 0.0603063233224 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114660786527 0.12726935374 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0205309695718 0.0580467560999 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 8.37731958763 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.63 8.71597938144 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.37 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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