You recently attended a conference and you would like to give a presentation in your office about the information you gained by attending the conference.
Write a letter to your manager asking for permission to give a presentation. In your letter:
describe what type of presentation you have in mind
what topics it would cover and how long it would take
who should participate in the presentation and where should it be conducted
Dear Mr. Smith,
Greetings for the day!
I am writing this letter to share my conference experience that I attented last week in Mumbai. Further, I need your permission to share my experience with our company's employees through presentation.
Kindly allow me to elaborate this matter. As the conference is related to new marketing stratergies, which were represented by top most sucessful businessman of our country, Amit Rana. In this presentation, I want to share all of his rules to make marketing bussiness lucrative. It is a power point presentation, and mostly focused on the needs of customers.
The topic, which I selected for this, is 'How to understand the needs of customers'. I selected this topic because some of new employees, who are recently joined in this month are not aware of the needs of our customers. Not only I include practical session in this, but also it takes only one hour to finish.
If you allowed me, I would like to give this presentation to new joining employees as well as our old employees, who are worked in our company since four years. Moreover, I would like to use our new build conference hall for this entire official event.
So please allow me to represent my views through this presentation.
Looking forward to your prompt response.
Yours faithfully,
Amanpreet Kaur
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...re official event. So please allow me to represent my views through this prese...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ur prompt response. Yours faithfully, Amanpreet Kaur
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, moreover, so, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 32.9175257732 118% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 26.3917525773 125% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 3.85567010309 259% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1114.0 937.175257732 119% => OK
No of words: 222.0 206.0 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01801801802 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8600083453 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9038231602 2.54303337028 114% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 127.690721649 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.608108108108 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 335.7 290.88556701 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.6811270756 44.8134815571 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.5714285714 76.5299724578 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8571428571 16.8248392259 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.64285714286 4.34317383033 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.29896907216 163% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158039506845 0.216113520407 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0563924584261 0.0766984524023 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0480387321706 0.0603063233224 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0719861697626 0.12726935374 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0492014683303 0.0580467560999 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 8.37731958763 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.54 8.71597938144 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 41.2886597938 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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