You recently attended a conference and you would like to give a presentation in your office about the information you gained by attending the conference.
Write a letter to your manager asking for permission to give a presentation. In your letter:
• describe what type of presentation you have in mind
• what topics it would cover and how long it would take
• who should participate in the presentation and where should it be conducted
Write at least 150 words.
You do NOT need to write any addresses.
Begin your letter as follows:
Dear ............,
Dear Mr. Simon,
I am writing this letter with regards to seek permission to do the presentation about the knowledge which I acquired in the conference.
Let me explain you in more detail. Recently, I have attended Human resource seminar in Mumbai, organized by government authorities. During the presentation, they imparted information about employee engagement, but the most important topic which they have presented is sexual harassment. So, I would like to conduct small conference with our employees and provide knowledge about the sexual harassment.
In the meeting, I will discuss about the topics like basic HR policies, office harassment and taking feedback and suggestions of the employees, with regards to the work life. The discussion will takes place about an hour or two, depending upon the number of employees engaging in the conference.
I would request to all head of the department to participate in the meeting, also send maximum number of participants from their team. We could conduct the presentation in our training hall. I would also be requiring projector and screen to show some video clips about the office harassment. At the end of the meeting, we could also form committee for our employees, to report any issue faced by them.
I will be waiting for your positive response.
Yours sincerely,
Tim Frank
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 404, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... knowledge about the sexual harassment. In the meeting, I will discuss about the...
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Line 7, column 196, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'take'
Suggestion: take
...s to the work life. The discussion will takes place about an hour or two, depending u...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 26.3917525773 140% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 3.85567010309 363% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1137.0 937.175257732 121% => OK
No of words: 216.0 206.0 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.26388888889 4.54256449028 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.83365862548 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90203192024 2.54303337028 114% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 127.690721649 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.615740740741 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 336.6 290.88556701 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 1.44329896907 346% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.3036031928 44.8134815571 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.4615384615 76.5299724578 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6153846154 16.8248392259 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.30769230769 4.34317383033 30% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222799070036 0.216113520407 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0696280742728 0.0766984524023 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0373626033655 0.0603063233224 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104874400964 0.12726935374 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0381567750759 0.0580467560999 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 8.37731958763 140% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 70.7449484536 78% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.93 8.71597938144 148% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 7.59969072165 113% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 41.2886597938 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.