A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter
* give contact details for when you are away
* give instructions about how to care for your pet
* describe other household duties
Write at least 150 words.
You do NOT need to write any addresses.
Begin your letter as follows:
Dear .....................,
Dear John,
Hope you are doing well. As discussed with you yesterday, my company has decided to send me to Sydney for attending annual summit of our organization, which will be there for two days.
I can’t express my happiness, as this will be the first event which I will be attending. I am really thankful to you as you agreed to take care of my apartment and pet in my absence. I am flying to Sydney tonight and will hand over the keys to you before departing. I have written down the hotel details with contact number in a note pad which is kept on a bedside table. If my mobile number is not reachable then you can contact on the board line number of the hotel and keep the message for me.
As you know, my pet Max is not well from last week due to climatic conditions. So the doctor has given medication which he has to take two times in a day and little care should be taken that he doesn’t eat anything except packet which is kept next to his kennel.
I’d be grateful if you could also water the hibiscus plant which is there in the balcony. Request you to please water it daily because that is a hybrid plant and I ordered from India, as this plant is not easily available in our country.
I will also keep in touch with you whenever I get free time from event.
Regards,
Saurabh
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 188, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... of my apartment and pet in my absence. I am flying to Sydney tonight and will ha...
^
Line 3, column 271, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... over the keys to you before departing. I have written down the hotel details wit...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, really, so, then, well, as to, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.48453608247 174% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.03092783505 264% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1064.0 937.175257732 114% => OK
No of words: 248.0 206.0 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.29032258065 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 3.78020617076 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.30919924317 2.54303337028 91% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 127.690721649 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.564516129032 0.622605031667 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 330.3 290.88556701 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.83505154639 272% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 45.3956961701 44.8134815571 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.6666666667 76.5299724578 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6666666667 16.8248392259 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.66666666667 4.34317383033 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.130397224364 0.216113520407 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0510656291375 0.0766984524023 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0400772884072 0.0603063233224 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0725170613185 0.12726935374 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0332086864072 0.0580467560999 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 8.37731958763 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 76.56 70.7449484536 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.6 8.71597938144 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.3 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.