The system used for rubbish/garbage collection in your local area is not working properly. This is causing problems for you and your neighbours.Write a letter to the local council. In your letter-Describe how the rubbish collection system is not working p

Essay topics:

The system used for rubbish/garbage collection in your local area is not working properly. This is causing problems for you and your neighbours.
Write a letter to the local council. In your letter
- Describe how the rubbish collection system is not working properly
- Explain how this is affecting you and your neighbours
- Suggest what should be done about the problem

Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to express dissatisfaction towards garbage collection from past few days.
Let me explain in more detail. The government has made an announcement of collecting garbage on a daily basis and the community was happy with this initiative. From past two weeks, the frequency of garbage collection truck is not efficient as it was earlier. Sometimes, it arrives early in the morning whereas it collects the garbage after a span of two to three days.
Due to negligence of this service, the waste material is piling up in a bin due to which many people and students might suffer from several health issues. Sometimes, the waste from dustbin overflows out of it and spreads across the road.
I would request you to look into this matter and ask the management to start the service as it used to be earlier, which will help to keep the society clean and healthy.
I will be waiting for your positive response and will provide support from our side if needed.
Yours faithfully,
Saurabh

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 8, column 8, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e if needed. Yours faithfully, Saurabh
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so, whereas

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 32.9175257732 49% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 844.0 937.175257732 90% => OK
No of words: 176.0 206.0 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79545454545 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64232057368 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63136281192 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.664772727273 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 254.7 290.88556701 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 0.824742268041 485% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.9504266191 44.8134815571 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.4 76.5299724578 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6 16.8248392259 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.1 4.34317383033 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150982866772 0.216113520407 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0586474032401 0.0766984524023 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0426870860743 0.0603063233224 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.067207536642 0.12726935374 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0341976211043 0.0580467560999 59% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 8.37731958763 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.26 8.71597938144 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.89 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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