The system used for rubbish/garbage collection in your local area is not working properly. This is causing problems for you and your neighbours.
Write a letter to the local council. In your letter:
describe how the rubbish collection system is not working properly
explain how this is affecting you and your neighbours
suggest what should be done about the problem
Write at least 150 words.
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am jyoti singh , a resident of Pravara nagar,Bopal.I am writing this letter to file a compliant regarding the problem causing by garbage in our local residential area.
there were several problems,which we facing now days,because of the garbage. To begin with,The sweeper are not working properly. The do not come on time to collect the garbage. that is why people have thrown the home garbage material outside the road. my home is just opposite of the road where the people throw the garbage.
Me and my neighbours are completely disappointed that stink of the place coming from, and on the top of these heaps lot of mosquitoes and flies are buzz.If steps are not taken soon , this place will become a dumping spot. Moreover there may spread epidemics of disease.
It is my humble request, to do something regarding this issue. Firstly all this problems need immediate action. Secondly , I request you hire only needy worker who finish their work properly and on time.
Hoping a prompt action from regarding this matter.
Your's Faithfully,
jyoti singh.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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Dear Sir/Madam, I am jyoti singh , a resident of Pravara...
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Dear Sir/Madam, I am jyoti singh , a resident of Pravara nagar,Bopal.I am ...
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...yoti singh , a resident of Pravara nagar,Bopal.I am writing this letter to file a comp...
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...ngh , a resident of Pravara nagar,Bopal.I am writing this letter to file a compli...
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Suggestion: There
...rbage in our local residential area. there were several problems,which we facing n...
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Suggestion: , which
...ial area. there were several problems,which we facing now days,because of the garba...
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Suggestion: , because
...everal problems,which we facing now days,because of the garbage. To begin with,The sweep...
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Suggestion: , The
...ys,because of the garbage. To begin with,The sweeper are not working properly. The d...
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...h,The sweeper are not working properly. The do not come on time to collect the garbage...
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...ot come on time to collect the garbage. that is why people have thrown the home garb...
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Suggestion: My
...home garbage material outside the road. my home is just opposite of the road where...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'heaps'' or 'heap's'?
Suggestion: heaps'; heap's
...ce coming from, and on the top of these heaps lot of mosquitoes and flies are buzz.If...
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Suggestion: If
...ps lot of mosquitoes and flies are buzz.If steps are not taken soon , this place w...
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Line 7, column 181, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ies are buzz.If steps are not taken soon , this place will become a dumping spot. ...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Moreover,
... this place will become a dumping spot. Moreover there may spread epidemics of disease. ...
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Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...thing regarding this issue. Firstly all this problems need immediate action. Secondl...
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Suggestion: ,
...problems need immediate action. Secondly , I request you hire only needy worker wh...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, may, moreover, regarding, second, secondly, so, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 32.9175257732 64% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 917.0 937.175257732 98% => OK
No of words: 179.0 206.0 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12290502793 4.54256449028 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65774358864 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66599045989 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.703910614525 0.622605031667 113% => OK
syllable_count: 276.3 290.88556701 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 55.219304574 44.8134815571 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.5384615385 76.5299724578 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.7692307692 16.8248392259 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.23076923077 4.34317383033 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 2.54639175258 668% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 7.41237113402 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167395977159 0.216113520407 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0498569936346 0.0766984524023 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0459712265557 0.0603063233224 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0689805318662 0.12726935374 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.050312474631 0.0580467560999 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 8.37731958763 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 70.7449484536 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.82 8.71597938144 136% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.