On a recent holiday you lost a valuable item. Fortunately, you have travel insurance to cover the cost of anything lost.
Write a letter to the manager of your insurance company. In your letter
•describe the item you lost
•explain how you lost it
•tell the insurance company what you would like them to do
Dear Sir/Madam,
my name is jyoti Singh. I am writing this letter to inform you that my bag which contained some important documents, and also some golden jewellery had lost during the traveling.
On the last weekend, I traveled from Delhi to Singapore at that time period I had lost m bag. The bag has some important documents and a golden ring, which I bought in Singapore. When I decided to go in shop to do some extra shopping then I went shop by local taxi.when I reached in shop then I directly gone to the shop and start shopping after I had finished my shopping. I came back then I suddenly realized my bag was lost.At that time , I tried a lot to find this bag but unfortunately, the bag did not find.
that is why I would like to request you that, I want a claim for it. Please tell me all details and the documents which you required for the claim. I will send you all the details about my policy. Thank you for your cooperation in this matter, and I look forward to your reply.
Yours faithfully,
jyoti.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...wellery had lost during the traveling. On the last weekend, I traveled from Del...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...m Delhi to Singapore at that time period I had lost m bag. The bag has some impor...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: At
...hen I suddenly realized my bag was lost.At that time , I tried a lot to find this ...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ly realized my bag was lost.At that time , I tried a lot to find this bag but unfo...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: That
... unfortunately, the bag did not find. that is why I would like to request you that...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, look, so, then, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 3.03092783505 330% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 39.0 32.9175257732 118% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 829.0 937.175257732 88% => OK
No of words: 192.0 206.0 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.31770833333 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72241943641 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48055067025 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 127.690721649 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.59375 0.622605031667 95% => OK
syllable_count: 253.8 290.88556701 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.1418927173 44.8134815571 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.3636363636 76.5299724578 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4545454545 16.8248392259 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.81818181818 4.34317383033 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189081789325 0.216113520407 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0780758298602 0.0766984524023 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0573154194778 0.0603063233224 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129557443249 0.12726935374 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0588430614782 0.0580467560999 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.6 8.37731958763 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 70.7449484536 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.48 8.71597938144 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.28 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.