Some people think that modern technology is making people more sociable, while others think it is making them less sociable. Discuss both views and give your opinion
Furtherance in various communication modes yielding multiple options for masses to interact and participate in society .With this notion one set of people believes that this is helping in interactions with groups and communities .while another set of people are with a thought pool that such tools are reducing social conduct .In this essay I will discuss both development and make sound opinion from own thought process.
On the one side,with advert of internet based technologies it is possible to reach out to any body who is far away from home.The quick communications such as emails,chats and instant messaging are of great help with the continence .it is rather fast to draft on email and send not posting a letter to family or relative and wait for days to expect a reply.Furthermore chat and instant messaging is also fulfilling the social activities like brief chat and casual messages and greatings.For instance ,while traveling a person can not feel away from home and be in touch with family.
On the flip side ,due to faster communications within society members it has become routine for every one to follow updates.people are loosing interest in society due to many factors.one such factor is loss of curiosity .Rapid and rapidly available information make people disinterested and they tend to ignore it.Real time knowledges of events on the further side can create chaos due to fear of things,such as someone is met with accident and loved once are in utter shock.
while examining both views it is very clear in my mind that the social media tools are of potent tools that needs to be handled with care and caution .At one instance they are blessing in real moments while another they are curse to society of mishandled or overused.My clear view on bank on the side of net only safe use but also safe-conduct of onself.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, so, while, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1535.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91987179487 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8071635581 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.602564102564 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 491.4 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 78.0 20.2975951904 384% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 83.0703767898 49.4020404114 168% => OK
Chars per sentence: 383.75 106.682146367 360% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 78.0 20.7667163134 376% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 14.0 7.06120827912 198% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 24.0 5.01903807615 478% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.11515941154 0.244688304435 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0700015691974 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.038171478339 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0700015691974 0.151304729494 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.038171478339 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 40.7 13.0946893788 311% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -7.69 50.2224549098 -15% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 33.7 11.3001002004 298% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.44 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.5 8.58950901804 134% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 29.0 9.78957915832 296% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 33.2 10.1190380762 328% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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