In many countries,there are an increasing number of private cars .what are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend?
Nowadays,The number of cars have increased at an unprecedented rate.many people think that ,it is most beneficial to have an own car.However, there are both pros and cons to deciding to this.In this essay ,I will discuss some of the reasons why the use of private car is increase and some of the challenges created by this.
One of the main positives of having a car is ,it is more convenient transport type.What I mean by this is that people go anywhere,where they would like to go.people who have its own car they would use it for many purposes at any time when they want.For instance ,when we decide to go for family trip then we need not to book any public transport or other types of transportation or waiting for it.it can make you independent.having private car is so crucial when some unforseen emergency situation occurred.
secondly,when most of the people purchase cars then it automatically increase the production of cars.it is very fruitful to create a job in automobile industries.Take an example of developed country,there are many jobs options are created in automobile industries and also having a car is a status symbol.
Turning to the other side of the argument private car create more traffic congesion.To be more precise urban areas are full of cars in rush hour.Lets use city Mumbai as an example.The rate of accident is increase there just because of problem created by traffic.
Another issue is that private cars increase air and noise pollution in urban area.In other word this vehicle emit dangerous gases,it affect the quality of air, Moreover the quality of air is deteriorating.And also people face respiratory related health issues such as asthma.
All things considered,In todays modern era everyone want to have private vehicle,but it also have some disadvantages related to health.Personally,I believe that it is vital to having a own vehicle for people live's and economic impact.However ,we must know when and how much we use the car so that we can minimise the demerits.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, for instance, i mean, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1691.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 337.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0178041543 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11168877773 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.557863501484 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 558.0 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 56.0 20.2975951904 276% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 81.6117162068 49.4020404114 165% => OK
Chars per sentence: 281.833333333 106.682146367 264% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 56.1666666667 20.7667163134 270% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 14.5 7.06120827912 205% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 36.0 5.01903807615 717% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.258379794958 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.137488403047 0.084324248473 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0813200640907 0.0667982634062 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137488403047 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0813200640907 0.056905535591 143% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 30.3 13.0946893788 231% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 6.18 50.2224549098 12% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 26.3 11.3001002004 233% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.72 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.44 8.58950901804 122% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 28.5 9.78957915832 291% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 24.4 10.1190380762 241% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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