Some people think that modern technology is making people more sociable, while others think it is making them less sociable. Discuss both views and give your opinion
it is arguable that contemporary technological advancements had made it possible to be connected with a flick of a finger on their smart devices
thus making everyone becoming mutual friends to one and other. Although it has
its benefits of attaching all wireless it is impacting some to be less social and addicted to these equipment. In my opinion
emerging technology had truly took part in disturbing physical relationships in
the present days. To begin with, due to developments in modern devices such as
smartphones and tablets, an individual can now able to speak to any person on
universe through these communication. email had vanished the use of telegrams
and devastated posts since it had started, business talks and details of
meeting are share in seconds with e-mails, not to mention about social media
such as facebook or instagram which are now
popular applications in terms of personal chatting and sharing feelings. To
reiterate because of modern technology we should agree that everything made
easy but, many relations are at danger for which this technology need to be blamed. On the other side, use of computer and playing games
without break had brought many disorders among children. In adults, mobile
phones are the reason for causing partial brain damage and carcinomas. While
they are only means of communication these days its harmful effects are
unavoidable. For example, a recent study on use of mobile phones revealed that that " style="white-space: pre-wrap; cursor: default;">individuals are prone of menigiomas due to radiation
from these devices. In conclusion, despite the uses of these advancements in
technology one one " style="white-space: pre-wrap; cursor: default;">should be aware of its effects
and dangers and should use them with caution so that we can benefit through
them as per the threshold.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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... some to be less social and addicted to these equipment. In my opinion emerging technology ha...
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...opinion emerging technology had truly took part in disturbing physical relationshi...
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...an now able to speak to any person on universe through these communication. email had ...
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... prone of menigiomas due to radiation from these devices. In conclusion, despite t...
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...aution so that we can benefit through them as per the threshold.
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...aution so that we can benefit through them as per the threshold.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, second, so, thus, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1634.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.55782312925 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.54620180273 2.80592935109 126% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.615646258503 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 498.6 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 71.6384402099 49.4020404114 145% => OK
Chars per sentence: 148.545454545 106.682146367 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.7272727273 20.7667163134 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.63636363636 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 21.0 4.38176352705 479% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 20.0 5.01903807615 398% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0853562176953 0.244688304435 35% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0332934655535 0.084324248473 39% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0265186744718 0.0667982634062 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0246052215722 0.151304729494 16% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0295936722912 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.1 13.0946893788 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.26 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.49 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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