Many people nowadays work long hours and working has become more stressful.What are the reasons for this?What could companies do to help employees to improve their lives?

Essay topics:

Many people nowadays work long hours and working has become more stressful.

What are the reasons for this?

What could companies do to help employees to improve their lives?

People who work for earning are undergoing more and more stress every day and staying in a job for long hours making them prone to stress. The main reasons for this are due to productivity which results in the promotion and working for longer hours will yield them in getting extra pay, which is essential for some group of workers. Let's discuss some possible ways for how companies can make an employee feel better in the following details.

To embark on, some companies make employees work like a machine without minimum leisure time in between working hours, this is causing employees utmost pressure and stress-related issues such as headache, migraine, and disturbances in vision. Although their management offers them grants for working late hours after regular timings, this makes workers addicted to earning more for meeting their needs and without any notice, they undergo immense pressure which leads to instability in thinking and productivity. if however, they manage to do the productivity it has a lot of mistakes noticeable by team lead and again it affects the worker. For instance, in China workers are forced to work for straight twelve hours with only leisure of 15 or 30 min and its making worker's detrimental damage to their health and development is making employees commit suicide inside companies which are however camouflaged by employers.

On the other hand, if we get into solutions to curb this, employers should make workers take breaks in between and conducting timely sessions of physical exercise or small games which makes employees refresh and work again with new energy. promotions should be given on a productivity basis and not on long hour working. For instance, Canada has ranked top in making employees feel better at companies because of short stay and better pay. this kind of environment would make an individual feel better at work.

In conclusion, stress would make a person lose is control, makes him anxious are if they are expressed at work it causes irreversible damage. Hence, choosing a better company for our betterment will benefit one's health and feel peaceful. this is to say no one should run behind money at a cost of our health

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Average: 8.4 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, if, so, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, such as, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1834.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 364.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03846153846 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36792674256 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59384163561 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.574175824176 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 553.5 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 72.249037844 49.4020404114 146% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.0 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0 20.7667163134 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.28571428571 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.266069475004 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0996757656361 0.084324248473 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0564935918199 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171358730163 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0709250634614 0.056905535591 125% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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