Affording an fully equipped treatment costs one arm and a leg in modern era, this trend has begun early in 20th century where treatment costs had taken a dramatic incline since then. All nations should provide a free of cost health service which is essential for country’s growth and development. Expensive treatments are to be brought for availability at least for minimum cost. So that every one can afford alongside with free treatment supports. I completely agree that latest medical treatments are unavailable for below middle class public.
To begin with, although some states provide free treatment and health care it just lacks quality. People recurrently suffer from similar diseases for prolonged periods. Free health service is still a dream for many urban areas and remote areas which are not in government’s considerations. How can someone would expect expensive treatments and diagnostics for getting checked of what they’re suffering of. Many health camps are organized for some days and removed after wards which just don’t meet people’s need. Yes, advanced and cutting edge technology now helping in curing many diseases such as carcinoma’s and spinal cord disorder by equipments such as rapid arc laser and full endoscopic spine surgery equipment respectively. These are treatments which cost an arm and leg for average patients to get treatment under these varieties, nonetheless, they get conventional treatment which needs longer hospitalisation.
Although free services are made available, it is the government responsibility to contract with private hospitals for making advanced treatment’s available for minimal costs, so that every patient and individual would get a quality treatment. Every year survey has to be conducted to rule out which areas require the support for diseases which are dangerous and untreatable and organise private hospital camp with all facilities made available for them for limited period, this way, both hospital and people would benefit by getting publicity for hospital and quality care for patients around the areas.
To conclude, I completely acknowledge that free health service is just a name which needs much attention by every nation and streamlined by societies so that it becomes true and having a healthy nations makes it a wealthy nation in every aspect of the development, it is citizens who are future of the country’s growth. If they are cared for their health they will grow a better world.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 11, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
Affording an fully equipped treatment costs one arm ...
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Line 1, column 386, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[3]
Message: “So that” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...availability at least for minimum cost. So that every one can afford alongside with fre...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, nonetheless, so, still, then, as to, at least, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2120.0 1615.20841683 131% => OK
No of words: 389.0 315.596192385 123% => OK
Chars per words: 5.4498714653 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44106776838 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99042999238 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 225.0 176.041082164 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578406169666 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 648.9 506.74238477 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 88.5913855505 49.4020404114 179% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.5 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3125 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5625 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182151684162 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0747346540326 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0406250179668 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127941050527 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0418706676212 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.0946893788 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.63 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.29 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 78.4519038076 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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