Every country should have a free health service, even if this means that the latest medical treatments may not be available through the service because they are too expensive.
To what extent do you agree or disagree
medical support plays a crucial role in the lives of men and women around the world. every nation should extend cost-free health services in favor of all humans. it is stated that even basic amenities with proper life support would be enough as advanced treatments are unaffordable for all people. I completely agree with this statement because it improves quality of life so that an individual can live longer than usual and decreased mortality rate which brings a good reputation to the country.
To begin with, if every person on earth would get a health service which is effective and free that ensures patients that they can get treated with better care at no cost, this itself would treat the patient at least emotionally if not directly. Furthermore, conducting awareness camps about promoting these free health services would lead to the popularity of the country and offering free medicines and health aids could support patients at post-hospitalization periods. In this way, every citizen can live beyond their expectations. For example, Russia had declared that every all health services are free for its masses and advanced treatments are also offered only at minimal rates which are used to maintain that robust equipment that cures diseases.
In addition to this, governments should involve and reinforce these services by lowering taxes on such offerings and schemes such as discounted rates on the latest interventions should be made available for patients who are in need of advanced medical care. A well-regulated country will gain more investments from foreign nations which is useful for financially upholding these free services. For instance, in USA all free health services and under government control and advanced treatments are provided for free occasionally to enhance the quality of living of their pupil.
In conclusion, everyone would like to spend as much as possible time with their loved ones which is possible only by having a good medical support at the elderly age and when necessary. Hence, I desperately align with the statement of providing free treatments and if possible in the near future all men and women should get state-of-the-art treatments at no weight on their pockets.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, hence, if, so, well, at least, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1879.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 358.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24860335196 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34981470047 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80715556093 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553072625698 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 577.8 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 62.7027362728 49.4020404114 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.538461538 106.682146367 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.5384615385 20.7667163134 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.76923076923 7.06120827912 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228952731736 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.086398118131 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0397451197431 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140262879563 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0366646432888 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.1 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.