Nowadays many children are playing computer games instead of doing sports activities. Why is it happening? Is it a negative or positive development?
Sports are replaced by online games and multimedia devices in modern era. No child is going out and doing some physical activity. This essay opines that its completely a negative development because it brings many disorders and huge impact on children’s mental and physical growth. This essay will discuss the effects and impacts of computer gaming on younger brains.
To begin with, due to dramatic change in technology ever since 19th century it has made possible that, a person can play any game which he can feel to play, and at his comfort without moving physically, confining to a idle place with the help of computer and digital tablets where they can download millions of games, but as they are kids they wouldn’t know what changes that kind of games would bring them in future. This is happening just because of lack of awareness of physical games and benefits of it. Other reasons could be busy parents who cannot able to spend time for their kids to play in leisure or go out with kid. For instance, one of my neighbour family always insists their kid to play digital online games as they could work peacefully without their kids disturbance.
Although computer games and streaming sites has some benefits such as intellectual behaviour development, one can have these benefits only when they can limit themselves to it. But , physical sports activities has many benefits when compared to computer games, one can learn what could a team work would help with and keeps body tone maintains a healthy life and physique if they continue them for the rest of their age
In conclusion, although computer games are at times acceptable, they need to be limited and sports activities needs to be encouraged all the time when leisure period is available, parents needs to make kids aware of what a physical sport can make them achieve and should monitor them while they are on computers or mobile devices.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, while, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1599.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 326.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90490797546 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51658360746 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576687116564 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 500.4 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 20.2975951904 158% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 162.328093687 49.4020404114 329% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 159.9 106.682146367 150% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.6 20.7667163134 157% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189356723913 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0794060763716 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0316804026289 0.0667982634062 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118858109767 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0456962720635 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.9 13.0946893788 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.46 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.1190380762 146% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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