In many developing countries, there are major problems with the quality of air and water from both industry and the construction.
What problem has this created?
What solution could be provided to prevent this?
it is a controversial issue among developing nations that primary difficulties with the air and water characteristics are affected by industrialisation and infrastructure respectively. this has impacted humans with many diseases associated with respiration and vision disturbances and some times it may leads to kidney failure. these can be controlled by streamlining these private businesses and preventing polluting of air and water.
To begin with, people are suffering from asthma and respiratory disorders by inhaling polluted air due to emission of harmful gases into air by heavy manufacturing units which are centered in cities and urban areas. Especially in developing countries this trend is noticed too often. After being affected by these factors recovery is slow and unpredictable. Dust and waste releases from construction are also involving in damaging the environment. Drinking polluted water will result in renal failure and cause serious harm to health. For example, in India almost 40 % of water available is mixed with harmful wastes from industries and construction sites and not to mention about the air pollution which is in first place in comparison with 20 countries worldwide.
To curb these dangers government should stand in the first row to take up the issue seriously and bring strict rules about locating the factories to countryside and outskirts where less masses exist. Passing compulsory rules for constructions to take permission and directing wastes outside cities could treat detrimental damage which is happening for decades. For instance, in Russia no company is built inside city limits and all constructions are controlled and guided by government authorities so that no harm is done to air and water.
To conclude, responsibility lies on every one who lives in nation to take care of natural resources protection. Hence, companies should also avoid establishing them in busy areas and water purification has to be primary importance to every one to stay healthy and sound.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, hence, if, may, so, as to, for example, for instance, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 10.4138276553 202% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1720.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 313.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.49520766773 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12377526814 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.619808306709 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 540.9 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.5540052649 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.857142857 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3571428571 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.71428571429 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18189161951 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0599871476048 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0431782527903 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104097412764 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0738977593174 0.056905535591 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.92 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.02 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 78.4519038076 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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