Some people say that now we can see films on our phones or tablets, there is no need to go to the cinema. Others say that to be fully enjoyed films need to be seen in a cinema. Discuss both the views and give our opinion.
Some would argue that it's possible now to enjoy any movies or content at ease with the advent of mobiles and digital devices such as ipads and iPhones, while others feel that complete satisfaction of indulging in the movie is possible only with our presence in theatres and cinema halls. Both perspectives have it points to discuss but, I personally admit that the complete experience of a movie can only be felt at theatres.
To begin with, smartphones made everything possible ever since they took over mankind with their intelligence and performances and the internet in addition to these abilities shook the use of phones and laptops. Illegal websites are bringing movies early before there release in theatres through piracy and users are interested in them to watch on mobile screens which are in one-way dangerous to eyes and encouraging piracy is letting economical disturbances in film industries. For example, a survey revealed that downloads are dramatically increased over the past 2 years because of many websites sharing free movies on the internet and the handheld smartphones can access all of them at a flick of a finger.
although smartphones had all the benefits as discussed above, they cannot replace the essence of a cinema theatre and the sound effects and the realm of characters shown on a massive screen. Blockbuster movies completely depend on income from theatres and stars and actors get paid only by these returns on which directors expect it to be. So, if an individual would like to watch a film they should definitely go to cinema halls and grab the ultimate feel of the movie. Most of the great cinemas such as PVR and INOX are also offering 4d effects to make a movie more realistic and true to life with dynamic chairs and special effects. This is not gained with mobile devices or smart devices hence, one should definitely choose cinema over a smartphone to watch films and movies. For instance, a recent study on people proved that no source can replace the feel of cinema halls except cinema itself.
In conclusion, although smartphones can be used to pass time or officially published films they're not meant for seeing a film in it. The cinema is the only place where we could indulge and watch films. I desperately enjoy movies only by watching them on a big screen.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, so, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 10.4138276553 221% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 41.998997996 148% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1933.0 1615.20841683 120% => OK
No of words: 394.0 315.596192385 125% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90609137056 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45527027702 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60001070328 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 223.0 176.041082164 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565989847716 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 612.9 506.74238477 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 64.2310879019 49.4020404114 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.071428571 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.1428571429 20.7667163134 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.85714285714 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206552538904 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0716875848486 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0471482878317 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128394957043 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.056006814391 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.