You work at home and have a problem with a piece of equipment that you use for your job.
Write a letter to the shop or company which supplied the equipment. In your letter
describe the problem with the equipment
explain how this problem is affecting your work
say what you want the shop or company to do
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing this letter to inform you about the laptop that you have supplied for me to work from home, that has stopped working since yesterday.
The major error it is showing on screen is that it is unable to login and cannot find users with my logins. Till the last two days, everything was fine with the computer but, all of a sudden today morning when I tried to enter my details, it just ignored my access.
Without accessing it I could not able to do any work that has assigned by my team leader and everything just piles up and it would be a burden for me to clear it later. If this continues for a couple of days as it is many of our clients will raise grievances as the data which is with me is so crucial that I had to forward me by tomorrow end of the day.
I hope you understand the seriousness behind this and address the issue promptly so that i can continue to extend my services from home and prevent unavoidable circumstances from customers of our company. Kindly send one of your technicians so that he could look into the problem and resolve it as soon as possible
Awaiting for your early response
Yours sincerely
kittu
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 105, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... have supplied for me to work from home, that has stopped working since yesterday...
^^
Line 9, column 192, Rule ID: TODAY_MORNING[1]
Message: This is a non-standard collocation. Normally, 'this morning' is used.
Suggestion: this morning
... with the computer but, all of a sudden today morning when I tried to enter my details, it ju...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 17, column 90, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... and address the issue promptly so that i can continue to extend my services from...
^
Line 21, column 1, Rule ID: AWAITING_FOR[1]
Message: Did you mean 'awaiting' or 'waiting for'?
Suggestion: Awaiting; Waiting for
...and resolve it as soon as possible Awaiting for your early response Yours sincerel...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 3.03092783505 297% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 42.0 32.9175257732 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 975.0 937.175257732 104% => OK
No of words: 218.0 206.0 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.47247706422 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84250218741 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41099451212 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.628440366972 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 295.2 290.88556701 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 16.3608247423 189% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 27.9635331043 44.8134815571 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.285714286 76.5299724578 182% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.1428571429 16.8248392259 185% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.42857142857 4.34317383033 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246371899751 0.216113520407 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0962540685724 0.0766984524023 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0768506833529 0.0603063233224 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126908883008 0.12726935374 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0626548002073 0.0580467560999 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 8.37731958763 181% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.93 70.7449484536 80% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 7.45979381443 174% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.24 8.71597938144 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 7.59969072165 111% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 8.54432989691 169% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 8.15463917526 159% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.