In the future it is expected that there will be a higher proportion of
old people than younger people in many countries.
Is this a positive or negative development?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from
your own knowledge or experience.
it is anticipated that in the near future elderly aged people will outweigh younger people in terms of numbers in most of the nations. I desperately feel this as negative progress because this increases the burden on the government in relation to higher tax for the oldies and hospitals will be overcrowded as old-age persons tend to get attack by various diseases due to decreased immunity.
To embark on, when a person grows older with time he gets to the point where he has to retire serving his country as a professional which in turn has an effect on the tax reduction as he works no more and the government has to pay in return, which is detrimental. although, living a long life would make people and family members happy this has an end at some time. but, it also has an impact on the country's budgets. For example, recently in China, a study on various aged people revealed that they still want to live at least 100 years as they don't want to lose their relationships so soon. Matter of the fact is that they're not aware of how do they receive a pension for the upcoming generations they might have to know that there will be soon scarcity of funds in their country.
In addition to this hospitals are running their businesses successfully with the grace of these old aged patients as they only admit for the palliative treatment they had to visit regularly to stay healthy and sound and this indirectly making hospitals earn as much they want. Unnecessary tests are imposed on patients for grabbing money from them. If this continues to rise there would be no place for other young adults or probably rest of the age group to admit into the health care centres as they are already filled with geriatric patients who require keen observation. For instance, recently W.H.O released a report stating that there is a dramatic inclination of older patients since last year to this year which is a warning sign for government.
To conclude, although emotionally everyone wants their relationships to be withheld for as long as they needed, but, this might bring some dangers along with the duration of living which are noteworthy. Average mortality has to be in threshold so that countries can be stable financially and socially. Always youth should also have the opportunity to serve the nation may it be physical or through any other means
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, still, as to, at least, for example, for instance, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1957.0 1615.20841683 121% => OK
No of words: 410.0 315.596192385 130% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77317073171 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49982852243 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58117584999 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 235.0 176.041082164 133% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.573170731707 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 603.9 506.74238477 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 70.8465213813 49.4020404114 143% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.785714286 106.682146367 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.2857142857 20.7667163134 141% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.14285714286 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162317564789 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0598038630554 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0457293056372 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112485371113 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0573883878394 0.056905535591 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 50.2224549098 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.98 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 9.78957915832 189% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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