In the future all car buses and trucks will be driverless The only people travelling Inside these vehicles will be passengers Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages

Essay topics:

In the future all car, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling Inside these vehicles will be passengers.
Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?

It is anticipated that automobiles, heavy vehicles will be self driving and only people who board them would be passengers. Although it results in unemployment, driver less vehicles could result in less accidents and reduced traffic congestion due to proper following of the rules and the advantages will far outweigh the disadvantages.

To begin with, with recent advancements in technology all the fields are trying to imply them in the possibilities that help the mankind, one such implication is the future of self driving vehicles that are used for transport and commute in everyday life. These vehicles can be summoned with a application on mobile and can be used to people who are differently abled. For example, Tesla which is a big technology company that produces self driving cars is already helping many people travel long distances without a driver and these vehicles are eco-friendly and runs with electricity.

This change could result in losing jobs by taxi drivers or heavy vehicles drives who drives buses for their daily wages as the artificial intelligence can take over these jobs. Governments must encourage these drivers and allocate them different sector of work and help them. For instance, in Germany the drivers are given other jobs in sectors such as manufacturing and developing of new ideas of driving that could help AI to drive better.

To conclude, despite the replacement technology takes on with drivers and their jobs proper use of it will shape a better future and faster transport system and protecting planet with less carbon emissions.

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 199, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun accidents is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...t, driver less vehicles could result in less accidents and reduced traffic congesti...
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Line 1, column 203, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...river less vehicles could result in less accidents and reduced traffic congestion...
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Line 3, column 293, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...fe. These vehicles can be summoned with a application on mobile and can be used t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, for example, for instance, such as, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1333.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20703125 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79204530188 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5625 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 418.5 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 50.8384029045 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 148.111111111 106.682146367 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.4444444444 20.7667163134 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.88888888889 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22127029948 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101310966856 0.084324248473 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0786661598446 0.0667982634062 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135932460031 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0872201829219 0.056905535591 153% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.3 13.0946893788 132% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.28 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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