It is believed that television takes away leisure time of public and make them sluggish and idle and also it makes them isolated from friends and relatives. I completely agree to that statement because, developing technology has brought many changes in people’s living and it makes them stick to small screens at home such as tv and internet.
To begin with, televisions since their origin in 20th century, it became a part of every family living out there. Its no wonder that a state might be without basic amenities but they have a television at their homes. People spend after hours of their busy schedule at homes and they don’t tend to stay calm or work again even after getting to home. Here, tv plays a major role in entertaining individuals, whenever a person has a leisure they tend to spend their time watching series of shows, sports, travel or some other programmes. For example, my niece who works 8 hours a day and has plenty of time to spend with family but, he always sits in front of a small screen and binge watches sports channels every single day. My in law sister got vexed with this and planned to sell the tv off.
On the other hand, although television makes people entertain with its shows are whatever broadcasts, it makes people immovable, confined to houses and makes them lethargic, a person who watches channels continuously tends to eat a lot and doesn’t have control over his food, there brain cannot diversify both the activities. Watching some thing on screen and eating has detrimental effects on humans health, This may leads to obesity and diabetes. Also, addiction towards watching TV makes them isolated from friends and family. For instance, a study in the US had found that people who relentlessly watch TV has psychological imbalance and sometimes they may go into a state where they don’t remember own relationships.
In conclusion, although tv entertains us in our leisure time, it makes us separate from relations and outer world. So, one should have self control over watching tv channels and also balance their free time spending it with friends, family, and with relatives.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 115, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: It's; It is
... part of every family living out there. Its no wonder that a state might be without...
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Line 5, column 341, Rule ID: ANY_BODY[2]
Message: Did you mean 'something'?
Suggestion: something
...diversify both the activities. Watching some thing on screen and eating has detrimental ef...
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Line 5, column 400, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'humans'' or 'human's'?
Suggestion: humans'; human's
...n and eating has detrimental effects on humans health, This may leads to obesity and d...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 10.4138276553 221% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1788.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 363.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92561983471 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3649236973 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6341735508 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584022038567 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 544.5 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 63.4565977336 49.4020404114 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.714285714 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.9285714286 20.7667163134 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.64285714286 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199660877965 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0728187179936 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.057325885471 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142226089625 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0571916250626 0.056905535591 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.61 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.