Many countries want to host international sports event, while other
countries think that hosting sports events has more problems than
benefits.
Discuss both views & give your opinion.
It is said that many nations always insist on hosting foreign sports events in their state, some say that there are many difficulties associated with hosting one than the advantages. this essay will discuss both sides and in my opinion, I believe hosting a game would be challenging but have a lot of benefits which might far outweigh the problems.
To start with, games that are internationally admired will have a lot of demand which is gradually raising every year, this has taken the event hosting to next level where every country out there wants to host a sport event in their home town as it brings lots of funds and popularity. Sports such as badminton, foot ball, cricket are in the core demand list where every country has interest to host particular tournaments in their state, as many people show interest in watching them in stadiums countries will use this interest as an advantage and make it cash by organising those games and selling tickets, merchandise related to that particular event and lot of third-party stalls which inturn pays for the event organizer to sell their stuff around the event areas. Government also supports this as they receive funds for their country in the name of sport and their country gains huge popularity. For example, last year Olympics which was organized in london has made them earn 6 million dollars only by selling tickets for the event and other earnings were not quantified which however will be in profits.
On the other hand problems associated with hosting an sport event could be only one or two major issues where they need to take care of vip guests, protecting them and securing their stay would cost a lot. Maintaining the event venues like stadiums whether indoor or outdoor is a big mess. Every audience would litter the place, stadium cleaning needs much funds in maintaining it. Securing the players and important delegates leave the government in tension. As before mentioned securing them is the only situation which cost atleast half a billion dollars and other half would be bring all the facilities to availability. For example, international cricket world cup which was organized in germany brought the state goverment a huge financial impact as they need to secure the players and delegates for whole 3 months till the event completion which costed them 3 million dollar as per survey results.
In conclusion, organising an sport event has both ups and downs but, planning it appropriately would benefit a country in many ways, in my opinion no country should leave a opportunity to organize an international sports event as it has benefits If perfectly organized.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, third, for example, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, to start with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2204.0 1615.20841683 136% => OK
No of words: 444.0 315.596192385 141% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96396396396 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.5903493882 4.20363070211 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59861113036 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 233.0 176.041082164 132% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.524774774775 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 671.4 506.74238477 132% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 20.2975951904 168% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 106.455591208 49.4020404114 215% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 169.538461538 106.682146367 159% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.1538461538 20.7667163134 164% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.15384615385 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.289417998362 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106311845556 0.084324248473 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0902827380009 0.0667982634062 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.207303645728 0.151304729494 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0657656558059 0.056905535591 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.0 13.0946893788 145% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.43 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.08 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.78957915832 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.6 10.1190380762 154% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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