Some people think that computers and the internet are more important for a child's education than going to school. But others believe that schools and teachers are essential for children to learn effectively. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
children who need to be educated have to expose under both conditions along with teachers, schools and computers and the internet to acquire knowledge efficiently. But, nothing is superior over another lets review both sides of the topic with following statements on the same
To embark on, the present generation has completely adhered to smart devices and online streaming, mobile phones have become a body part for parents who bear the responsibility for upbringing a child's future, children who see those devices in parent's hands are assuming that as a magic thing which grasps everyone's attention and they are being addicted alike as their parent's which is unusual and learning from a computer with internet will not offer a reliable data because it is written by many anonymous unidentified patrons. For example, a friend of mine had recently attempted a competitive exam for which he completely relied on the internet and he failed in the test after which he came to know that the answers what he wrote were completely irrelevant to the questions asked in the exam.
On the other hand, having a teacher and peers who learn competitively along with us as such in a classroom would be more effective to learn a new skill or discover new talent among us, attending tests in schools results in competing skills which is mandatory to grow in a new perspective. A study in the UK on children educating under guidance in a school has revealed that they are much active and able to show flexibility in all areas like arts and science in comparison with children who never attended a school or institution
To conclude this, computer learning and school learning have their own benefits if used wisely, in my opinion, it's always good to attend a school and learn rather than learning an unreliable content
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...o never attended a school or institution To conclude this, computer learning and ...
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..., computer learning and school learning have their own benefits if used wisely, in m...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, for example, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1511.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93790849673 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69288382729 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.607843137255 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 479.7 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 61.0 20.2975951904 301% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 167.215549516 49.4020404114 338% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 302.2 106.682146367 283% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 61.2 20.7667163134 295% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 11.6 7.06120827912 164% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.244848753168 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.128040610751 0.084324248473 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0544159576453 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144786011765 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0292233385759 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 32.4 13.0946893788 247% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 9.56 50.2224549098 19% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 27.1 11.3001002004 240% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.26 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.38 8.58950901804 121% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 28.5 9.78957915832 291% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 26.4 10.1190380762 261% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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