Some scientists think that there are intelligent life forms on other planets and messages should be sent to contact them. Other scientists think that it is a bad idea and would be dangerous.Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Essay topics:

Some scientists think that there are intelligent life forms on other planets and messages should be sent to contact them. Other scientists think that it is a bad idea and would be dangerous.

Discuss both views and give your opinion.

It is argued that there is something more intellectual is living along with humans as similar but on other planets and a step has to be taken forward to communicate with these aliens or unknown life forms. Whilst, others state that this is a wrong thought to consider which might be harmful. Let's debate that despite contacting strange intellectual forms would be detrimental, we might have phenomenal developments if we meet them somehow.

To begin with, believing about other life forms is purely intentional and only a few pieces of evidence show their existence. However, whatever knowledge scientists gained till today is about aliens and strange living creatures they outperform humans in every aspect, such as technology, intelligence, and anticipation about the future. For instance, a flying saucer crashed in the USA has proven that these unknown forms have way far futuristic that humans would spend decades to understand and even though they might not able to solve its formation strategy. All have wondered how a thing without any engines would fly in the sky with such huge mass.

Moreover, the disastrous effects this might throw is also an issue to shine some attention, nonetheless contacting them would yield for betterment no one would ever predict what danger they can cause to mankind. As per studies conducted on various researches and discoveries, aliens behave completely atypical which is, in turn, a difficult task to our specialists. For example, a documentary by BBC on aliens had revealed that if anyone would ever try to contact them they just scramble the communication resources in the area and it takes years to recover the same source. The behavior of this kind is definitely unhealthy to practice for our savants to handle the problems.

In conclusion, despite these strange dangers, if we somehow reach the life forms on other planets we can gain enormous control over the world and can change our futures. In my opinion, I wish we would establish contact with aliens to gain grip on our world and reverse the damage which we have done to the mother earth.

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Average: 8.9 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, nonetheless, so, as to, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1763.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 348.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06609195402 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31911543099 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68134707618 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.603448275862 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 541.8 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 47.1579242809 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.615384615 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.7692307692 20.7667163134 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5384615385 7.06120827912 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183204127073 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0628210789903 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0415009299441 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11057321933 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0501190998903 0.056905535591 88% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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