ELTS Letter Writing / GT Writing Task 1:
You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
You have bought a new mobile phone and in a few days of purchase, it has stopped working. You have spoken to the company representative a week ago but it has still not been repaired.
Write a letter to the company. In your letter,
introduce yourself
explain the situation
say what action you would like the company to take
Write at least 150 words.
You do NOT need to write any addresses.
Begin your letter as follows:
Dear Sir or Madam,
Dear Sir or Madam,
I have purchased Nokia mobile on 8th September 2016. It was N6 Series with complimentary accessories in it.
I am writing this letter to express my dissatisfaction. I have bought the mobile and within span of three days, it stopped functioning. First, I thought battery has drained out, but after charging for two hours, the device didn’t started. In next minute, I gave call to the customer representative regarding this issue and he assured me that he will check with his superior to resolve this issue. But till today, I didn’t received the call from your side.
I would request you to replace the mobile as it is in warranty and also request you to train the staff for resolving customer problem. I am attaching invoice copy with this letter for your reference.
I hope you will look into this matter and resolve the issue as soon as possible.
Yours faithfully,
Saurabh Dumbre
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...with this letter for your reference. I hope you will look into this matter and...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, look, regarding, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 774.0 937.175257732 83% => OK
No of words: 157.0 206.0 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92993630573 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53976893118 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79124821087 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 127.690721649 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.668789808917 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 230.4 290.88556701 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.2002535678 44.8134815571 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.3636363636 76.5299724578 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.2727272727 16.8248392259 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.36363636364 4.34317383033 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188631593378 0.216113520407 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0633237209718 0.0766984524023 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0569146287076 0.0603063233224 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106404698536 0.12726935374 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0276094521062 0.0580467560999 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 8.37731958763 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.72 8.71597938144 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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