Some universities now offer their courses on the Internet so that people can study online.
Is this a positive or negative development?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Write at least 250 words.
After invention of internet, many educational institutions are providing courses digitally to the students instead of classroom coaching. While there are many benefits to online education there are also some drawbacks to consider. In this essay, I will discuss both sides of the argument and propose my view .
Firstly, people from different ages can complete the education from the institutions which are providing online courses. For example, House wives, working professionals or elderly people can get the higher education by enrolling into the distance education and study after their working hours or during their leisure time. Secondly, there are some courses which are recorded and available on the internet, so that if anyone want to revise or didn’t understand any topic, then one can retake the classes over and over again. Lastly, there are paid courses where students can gather online knowledge of any courses without getting admission into the colleges. For example, there are courses like Udemy where various professors from different field record the video and upload it, so that people will be benefited from the same.
On the flip side, there are drawbacks of online education. If anyone has doubt related to their courses, then they have to wait till the tutor comes online or any specific date with regards to doubt solving session. Another factor is through online channel some of the practical skills cannot be taught. For example, Due to less motivation and without proper guidance, people can’t excel in the musical instruments at the same time.
To sum up, In my opinion, online courses has positive development over negative and in today’s world everyone can gain knowledge with the help of internet.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: wants
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...nother factor is through online channel some of the practical skills cannot be taught. For ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, lastly, second, secondly, so, then, while, for example, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1475.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30575539568 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56275158518 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.579136690647 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 475.2 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.7243923366 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.461538462 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3846153846 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.15384615385 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223448136889 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0729512412703 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0449787341948 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126211046591 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0600811630683 0.056905535591 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.11 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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