Some people say young people should be encouraged to leave their family when they become adults while some argue they should live for a longer time with their family. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
People have different views about encouraging youngsters to stay in nuclear family as opposed to extended family when they are grownup. While there are some benefits of staying with family, I believe residing independently is more beneficial.
On the one hand, children will gain sense of responsibility of becoming adults when they are living alone, otherwise it would have not possessed when they stay in joint family. Additionally,this will enable them to take decisions without help of their parents. For example, when I left home at 16 for further studies, I was responsible for where to stay and which survival job should I choose to sustain my life. Overall, living away from family develops skills which will be helpful in both home and society.
On the other hand, some people are of an opine that if adults will not go in wrong direction as they will be under guidance of their parents. Also, when staying with kin , adults don't have to do work while studying. For this reasons, people believe that they should not leave their parents.
In conclusion, I would argue that advantages of staying single outweigh the benefits of adults staying with family members.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, while, for example, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 983.0 1615.20841683 61% => OK
No of words: 196.0 315.596192385 62% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01530612245 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74165738677 4.20363070211 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62650012842 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 176.041082164 67% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.602040816327 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 300.6 506.74238477 59% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.3586570473 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.3 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.6 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.389191404474 0.244688304435 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.148218322888 0.084324248473 176% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0785141541179 0.0667982634062 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.224346775495 0.151304729494 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0944299421539 0.056905535591 166% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.72 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 78.4519038076 50% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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