Some people to buy local products while others prefer international products. Do you agree or disagree?
In this day and age, most of the populace are patronizing foreign products. Because they are more durable and the quality is robust which I agree to this notion.
To start with, the populace in this era are meticulous when it comes to buying and using items. That is why they are purchasing imported products because they believe that the merchandise is well built and it will last much longer than local goods. For example, young adults tend to buy branded shoes like Nike, Adidas or Converse which in fact will cost them a hefty amount of money in their pocket. Although it is much expensive than locally made shoes they still tend to buy those things since that it is made to last.
Moreover, a lot of teenagers are also worrying about how they look and what they wear everyday. Which also plays an integral part why they continuously buy things that come from the other countries. Wearing a Nike shirt is a trend setter rather tan a simple locally made shirt plus it gives them an edge into being accepted by their local peers. Another is that it will also advertisement and celebrities plays a supporting part in this kind of business because a bunch of the citizen tend to idolize them hence they will also follow what they recommend and what they use.
In summary, I equivocally agree to the statement that most of the people in today’s era would patronize foreign products rather than a locally made. It will last longer as well as it will make them look good and have a confidence when they walk around to other places.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 87, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
... about how they look and what they wear everyday. Which also plays an integral part why ...
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Line 7, column 175, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[3]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...han a locally made. It will last longer as well as it will make them look good and...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, look, moreover, so, still, well, for example, in fact, in summary, kind of, as well as, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1268.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.61090909091 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33043535109 2.80592935109 83% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.534545454545 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 394.2 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.0945930131 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.666666667 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9166666667 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.5 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.121246524845 0.244688304435 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0511198212368 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0377825692285 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0832758715861 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0304017009496 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 50.2224549098 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.75 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.83 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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