write a letter to your manager. In your letter1. Ask for some time off to complete a qualification2. Suggest what you will do later at work if you have time off3. Say how the qualification helps you job or company

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write a letter to your manager. In your letter

1. Ask for some time off to complete a qualification

2. Suggest what you will do later at work if you have time off

3. Say how the qualification helps you job or company

Dear Mrs. Prathibha

I am Bhanuprakash, I am working as a Field Application Engineer in Hyderabad Region. I am writing this letter for the purpose of request you to grant for a week's leave to complete the Artificial Intelligence Course.

I will explain in brief, As you know to present our client is Intel technologies and their project is based on Artificial intelligence. Present am doing Course-based on AI program. The Program will complete within a week and total week is having the Hands-on session program, So I need to be there for a week.

I already forward an e-mail to the client and he accepted my request and in the absence of myself my team member Rekha will take care of the project and I will take the daily reports from her and I will help her if any interruptions will be occurs during my absence.

This Course will very helpful to enhance my skills based on artificial intelligence and I can help next upcoming two projects based on Machine Learning.

I hope I will get a positive response from you.

Yours Sincerely,

Bhanuprakash

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 20, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Mrs. Prathibha I am Bhanuprakash, I am working as a Fie...
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Line 5, column 155, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a week' or simply 'weeks'?
Suggestion: a week; weeks
...the purpose of request you to grant for a weeks leave to complete the Artificial Intell...
^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...he Artificial Intelligence Course. I will explain in brief, As you know to p...
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Line 9, column 145, Rule ID: AM_I[1]
Message: Did you mean 'am I'?
Suggestion: am I
...sed on Artificial intelligence. Present am doing Course-based on AI program. The P...
^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, in brief, you know

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 4.92783505155 203% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 904.0 937.175257732 96% => OK
No of words: 185.0 206.0 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88648648649 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68801715136 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86493625612 2.54303337028 113% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 127.690721649 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.594594594595 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 272.7 290.88556701 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 72.0968792667 44.8134815571 161% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.444444444 76.5299724578 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5555555556 16.8248392259 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.88888888889 4.34317383033 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185048707121 0.216113520407 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0736135148227 0.0766984524023 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0519955158985 0.0603063233224 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0823233829006 0.12726935374 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0511430084503 0.0580467560999 88% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 8.37731958763 142% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 70.7449484536 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 8.71597938144 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 7.59969072165 111% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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