Some people believe that Earth is being damaged by human activities. Others feel the better it makes the better place to live. Discuss both views and state have view.
We are living in the advanced technology and science that has been tremendous in entire world by human civilization. some people argue that the Earth is being destroyed by human activities,at the same time others feel that activity that improves the standard of the life in earth. In my opinion, the influence of the people in earth is damaging by exploiting the natural resources. In this essay we will discuss both views before arriving to the rational conclusion.
On the one hand people harm the earth by exploiting the natural resources. Generally individuals are not much aware about the pollutions ,the causes and the effects. Moreover,
The people inhabitat the forest area and making it habitation and it leads to the climate change. To cite an example, in the recent research by the National conservation of resources says that due to the deforestation the greenhouse gases like CO2 who is increased in the atmosphere. Furthermore, the people are using fossil fuels for their daily needs.
On the other hand, some NGOs and Government organization has taken many steps to to make Earth a beautiful place to live by using technology. With advent of technology the life in the earth made very easy and comfortable. For instance, if you want to talk to someone in the past we have to to send a letter it may take 6 to 7 days to get a reply the sender, but now with the technological advancement we can contact any person in the world with the help of proper internet connection. Moreover, in the modern world there are many gadgets available to do our household works and it still keeps us in our comfort zone.
To conclude, even though the government and individuals has made various methods to make Earth a beautiful place to live, but still the flora and fauna of our Earth is still damaged by the people. This is essay discussed both views before arriving to a rational conclusion.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, may, moreover, so, still, for instance, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1580.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 328.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81707317073 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7555309152 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.542682926829 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 499.5 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.6252013723 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.333333333 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8666666667 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.26666666667 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.292957111731 0.244688304435 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0859748035391 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0746381298098 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145884090788 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.105222709012 0.056905535591 185% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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