Some people believe that employees should stay in the same job for the rest of their lives.
Others think they should switch jobs at least once during their worklife.
To what extent do you agree/disagree?
While some argue that people should work for the same job, I agree with those who say that changing job is necessary. This essay will explain how it encourages employees to stay motivated and helps them to learn new skills.
Firstly, a change of job motivates employees to become more productive in their work. This is due to the fact that they might feel monotonous by doing the same task every day. With a change of job, they become enthusiastic because they have something new to do. Consequently, they take more interest in doing the things that they have started to learn. For instance, one of my colleagues in my office, who was recently transferred from Accounting Department to Human Resource Department, told me that how motivated he was feeling due to entirely new tasks he had to perform. In contrast, employees following the same routine may develop slacking-off habits, and it may lead them to be fired from their jobs.
Secondly, moving to a new job enables workers to enhance their skill-sets. This is because their new jobs require them to do new things that they would not do otherwise. For example, five years ago, I changed my career from the job of an auditor to an accountant, and it helped me to equip with accounting skills which I did not have when I was an auditor. If I had not changed my job, I would not have learned these new skills. Conversely, people who keep on doing the same job do not learn new skills.
In conclusion, a career change is essential in my opinion because it is a source of motivation for employees, and they learn different things by doing new activities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, conversely, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, thus, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in contrast, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 24.0651302605 183% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1332.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67368421053 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63367401983 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.512280701754 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 401.4 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.7848029071 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.1428571429 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3571428571 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0 7.06120827912 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.244337623539 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104476671437 0.084324248473 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0649625694668 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161070300286 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0616953158716 0.056905535591 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 50.2224549098 136% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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