Some people believe that the government should make university education free for all. Others disagree and say that students should pay for their own education.
People have differing views about tertiary education whether if it should be offered free or students need to spend their own money to have a third level education. While a free education in university gives equal opportunity to learners, I believe that students should pay their own education for them to study harder.
On the one hand, governments should provide students to have a free tertiary education because it ensures that all learners are able to enter universities. This is to say that since earning a degree is quite expensive and some students come from families with limited financial resources, this gives them a chance as those who belong to wealthy groups to have a university education. For example, in Finland, their state allocated a huge amount of money for sending students in all walks of life to universities because they believe that education is an equal right that individual must enjoy. However, some students tend to become irresponsible in their studies because they do not mind or worry about the expenses paid by the government.
On the other hand, some people argue that if education in universities is gained when students pay their own tuition fees and miscellaneous they will study seriously. When learners use their own money they will be responsible enough to attend their lessons and do the necessary requirements in order to earn a degree. They will give importance on their studies because they know how expensive to enter a university. For instance, in the UK, university students are paying their own school fees by getting a student loan which they will pay when they finish their degrees. I believe that this is the main reason why it is better that tertiary education should be paid by students.
In conclusion, while some people taught that third level education should be free to give equal opportunities to all, it seems to me that paying your own education will make learners be responsible to finish their courses.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, third, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 43.0 24.0651302605 179% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1652.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 329.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02127659574 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69787275136 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.477203647416 0.561755894193 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 516.6 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 38.710104911 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.666666667 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.4166666667 20.7667163134 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.480825100391 0.244688304435 197% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.188743183725 0.084324248473 224% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105211512696 0.0667982634062 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.322889413518 0.151304729494 213% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0638999670634 0.056905535591 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.62 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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