Some people believe that governments should make investment in building public libraries in every town, while others think it is a waste of money because we have access to information via Internet. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Essay topics:

Some people believe that governments should make investment in building public libraries in every town, while others think it is a waste of money because we have access to information via Internet. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

It is true that technology advancement has provided opportunities with people to read or study in various ways. However, I argue that the public library are still meaningful to maintain and have a huge value to invest.
On the one hand. Someone reckons that the library has lower functions in using and profiting. The digital reading product allows individuals to do some reading flexibly without going out. People are unwilling to find a specific place to study any more and public usage of libraries is much lower than the past. Besides, governments should pay more attention to the infrastructure. A limited budget plays a virtual role in public service economically while the library cannot bring the profit.
On the other hands, opponent, some educations hold the views that public libraries should be built in numerous town, because of the education and materials. The public managers have the obligation to guarantee the power of citizens to receive knowledge. Therefore, the value of public libraries in populating education cannot be underestimated. Additionally, a number of historical books are impossible preserved through the electronic reading. Furthermore, public libraries contain a wide range of materials available to readers.
In conclusion, whatever the technology how to develop, the government always should do their job to ensure the meaning of the library.

Votes
Average: 5.6 (1 vote)

Comments

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, furthermore, however, if, so, still, therefore, while, in conclusion, it is true, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 7.0 24.0651302605 29% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1170.0 1615.20841683 72% => OK
No of words: 216.0 315.596192385 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.41666666667 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.83365862548 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.986753448 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.615740740741 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 376.2 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.6176939613 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.5714285714 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4285714286 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.71428571429 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215504309117 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.06291881955 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0491038044526 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111710031739 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0426236200625 0.056905535591 75% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.86 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.

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